Hm...
I DID laugh. I DON'T get it. I LIKE pie...
However, the stylistic unfolding of the action was nice.
Keep up the confusing work. :)
P.S. Without the bloodshed, but with a similar tone, you'd have a pretty kick-ass comedy, though... I'm not sure if you'd want that.
WHY?!
I hate so much to see flash start off so hopeful. This could have been really good! Instead: no preloader, no controls, no title, no credits...
C'mon, if you'd taken just a little more time!
Keep trying. :)
Not very good...
Simpler animation, a little more sense (I didn't know what the hell was going on), and cleaner loops of music are all needed.
The repetition of sprites was a piss-off, and the lack of plot sort of annoying. There was so much going on. Just tell a simple story. Use less as far as quantity, but maybe up the quality.
Keep trying. :)
It almost pleased me... I had to fake.
Your preload looks fantastic, very slick and sexy. However, the music sounded a little crispy at times, and a couple of your transitions could have been smoother, or less choppy. Awesome job on the fog effect.
Keep it up. :)
All I've got to say is...
Hottie!
(Yeah, I know - my lamest review ever.)
Try mixing that concept and humour into more animation.
Keep it up. ;)
Not quite sure...
Honestly, the strangest thing I have ever seen. The voices didn't seem fitting, kind of ruined a bit of it for me. I don't really understand what was going on at the end, either. It was kind of trippy. The beginning was sweet. The awesome effects used really worked well.
Keep up the great work. :)
If this were just flash, it'd be different.
This is not about flash. And, no... NewGrounds is not in any way responsible, but, the users and people submitting, the people reviewing, public in general. Obviously, this kid had some troubles, and obviously, no one was there to help him out.
Too many people give lame reviews, low scores, close their browser, and shut themselves off from being a proactive human. In this world, there's too much bullshit, and we can't afford to be neutral or pessimistic "Whatever - it is what it is." On countless occasions it's been one person who has made a difference for the better - one fucking person! So, all you spineless pieces of shit who are too lazy or unconcerned to try and do something positive need to realize it isn't as hard or pointless as you might think.
Please think.
Rest, Jeff, in peace.
The music...
If you had only chosen some better music, it might've helped to take the animation seriously. Otherwise, it just seemed a little hokey.
Keep trying. :)
Don't worry...I'll improve the music and everything by the next episode...
~RS~
Gotta' savour the flavour...
Not a lot of people I bet understand the concept-driven music.
Stop N' Go music is hard for the average listener to appreciate, but I thought it was pretty swift how you incorporated a generous helping of those samples into your animation.
Keep up the great work. :)
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