Bonus for the effort.
So, yeah, I DIDN'T take it too seriously (unlike the jerks who did) and I liked it! Cool little clay dudes, and your preloader was nice and original. I wasn't bothered by the mic distortion, barely even noticed. Maybe their speakers were too loud?
Anyway, perhaps you should make something with a quicker pace, or more storyline next time. There was humour, but it was pretty simple and dull.
Keep it up. :)
Lacking...
Yeah, obviously it isn't done, considering you never said any "truth" about Trix or the rabbit at all! Still a cool intro to something bigger (I hope).
Decent enough, but how can it be rated?
It's hard to comment or rate when it was made for personal reasons. Obviously, she'd understand this better than any of us. However, the writing struck me, was a little cliché. Also, the beginning was so abstract that I started to get bored. The music and pretty font almost seemed like they were the reason you made this until the prose came in at the end.
I am being a little hard on you, but THAT'S for somewhat personal reasons. I made a flash movie for the person I love using "Protect Life" for one scene. When I used it though, I made it walk hand in hand with the visuals. It pumped the feeling of the words into the viewer. You should try more synchronicity, which may help to drive the message (perhaps clarified) a little deeper.
All around, this was a very good flash, and it seemed very meaningful.
Keep up the good work. :)
Nice clouds...?
When you start off saying that you own, you're already putting a lot of pressure on your animation.
The character was cute, and some of the elements were well placed (like the music). However, there wasn't much substance, and therefore, no interest.
Keep trying.
Nice, but...
Drop the energy charge at the end. Use oriental-styled fonts.
Other than that, I thought it was very nice. (realistic motions)
Keep it up. :)
Solid.
How's it feel to be a franchise? :D
Seriously, you should have Sammylumpkins kidnapped by Emu, and Skade has to save her... but, first, she has to decide what to wear (what kind of superhero outfit). Afterwards, she goes to save Sammylumpkins, but gets robbed on the way. She has to build a violin out of wood and wire found in a dumpster and play for the public to raise money to take the bus to Emu's pond. Once there, she finds Sammylumpkins having tea alone, as Emu has left to pick up some scones (he forgot them when shopping earlier). Emu arrives just as Skade finishes telling her story of being robbed and playing the violin. Skade gives the violin to Emu, and he's touched (always wanted one). Sammylumpkins and Skade cry during a moonlit concert by Emu.
EDN.
Dude...
You guys are really smooth with the delivery of all the dialogue! That was my favourite part of it... the conversation.
Now then, SYNCH!! Damn, that was the most annoying part.
Cool humour, and swift drawing skills!
Keep up the good work. :)
Too far from a point...
What is it?
You've got to think about the basics of movie-making if you want to create flash like this. If viewers can't relate or connect to anything on the screen... there's nothing there worth watching. It's voice was cool. I'd like to see a remake with a plot.
Keep trying. :)
On another fence.
Age 40, Male
Student
Toronto, ON, Canada
Joined on 1/13/05
Milk (old) 
Trix Rabbit Justice Ad 
If... 
El Perro de FlashyNewb