JPhoenix84's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Man]

Details...

I could hardly see the red eyes throughout it. Is that what you wanted?

The ending was abrupt... maybe just fade out the image?

Keep it up.

kikkimikki responds:

Sorry, but as I said.
Its only a test movie...
I didnt put that much effort into it

[Milk (old)]

Bonus for the effort.

So, yeah, I DIDN'T take it too seriously (unlike the jerks who did) and I liked it! Cool little clay dudes, and your preloader was nice and original. I wasn't bothered by the mic distortion, barely even noticed. Maybe their speakers were too loud?

Anyway, perhaps you should make something with a quicker pace, or more storyline next time. There was humour, but it was pretty simple and dull.

Keep it up. :)

[Trix Rabbit Justice Ad]

Lacking...

Yeah, obviously it isn't done, considering you never said any "truth" about Trix or the rabbit at all! Still a cool intro to something bigger (I hope).

[If...]

Decent enough, but how can it be rated?

It's hard to comment or rate when it was made for personal reasons. Obviously, she'd understand this better than any of us. However, the writing struck me, was a little cliché. Also, the beginning was so abstract that I started to get bored. The music and pretty font almost seemed like they were the reason you made this until the prose came in at the end.

I am being a little hard on you, but THAT'S for somewhat personal reasons. I made a flash movie for the person I love using "Protect Life" for one scene. When I used it though, I made it walk hand in hand with the visuals. It pumped the feeling of the words into the viewer. You should try more synchronicity, which may help to drive the message (perhaps clarified) a little deeper.

All around, this was a very good flash, and it seemed very meaningful.

Keep up the good work. :)

[El Perro de FlashyNewb]

Nice clouds...?

When you start off saying that you own, you're already putting a lot of pressure on your animation.

The character was cute, and some of the elements were well placed (like the music). However, there wasn't much substance, and therefore, no interest.

Keep trying.

[*Kung-Fu*]

Nice, but...

Drop the energy charge at the end. Use oriental-styled fonts.

Other than that, I thought it was very nice. (realistic motions)

Keep it up. :)

[A Day of CS:S]

Why is this under judgement?

Okay, I'll try to be objective, since I am still a bit excited that my music has finally been used in a submission.

Nothing really outrageous or surprising happened in your animation, which may be detracting from your score, as this has been spoofed and whatnot before. Still, the movements were pretty clean (as simple as the dudes were drawn). I liked some of the frags, how they were timed pretty well, ended up seeming funny.

The only two things I'd complain about would be needing something unexpected at the end, maybe over the top... that couldn't actually happen in the game? And, believe it or not, my track was a problem. It seems to make the intro seem even slower than it is. The atmosphere was cool, but don't know if it went with the rest of it. So, maybe speed up the intro animation, and toss in a new ending, and it's at least a 4.

Keep it up. :)

Greyfox999 responds:

Thanks :)
ill keep that in mind ;)

your music rocks btw

[We dunno what to do]

Solid.

How's it feel to be a franchise? :D

Seriously, you should have Sammylumpkins kidnapped by Emu, and Skade has to save her... but, first, she has to decide what to wear (what kind of superhero outfit). Afterwards, she goes to save Sammylumpkins, but gets robbed on the way. She has to build a violin out of wood and wire found in a dumpster and play for the public to raise money to take the bus to Emu's pond. Once there, she finds Sammylumpkins having tea alone, as Emu has left to pick up some scones (he forgot them when shopping earlier). Emu arrives just as Skade finishes telling her story of being robbed and playing the violin. Skade gives the violin to Emu, and he's touched (always wanted one). Sammylumpkins and Skade cry during a moonlit concert by Emu.

EDN.

[Anime Kids Suck]

Dude...

You guys are really smooth with the delivery of all the dialogue! That was my favourite part of it... the conversation.

Now then, SYNCH!! Damn, that was the most annoying part.

Cool humour, and swift drawing skills!

Keep up the good work. :)

[Harlequin]

Too far from a point...

What is it?

You've got to think about the basics of movie-making if you want to create flash like this. If viewers can't relate or connect to anything on the screen... there's nothing there worth watching. It's voice was cool. I'd like to see a remake with a plot.

Keep trying. :)