Know what it means?
Well, screen shots came to mind, so you were successful in that. Still, some of the keys clash slightly, and it makes the piece a little confusing. I'm not really sure what kind of feeling you were going for, and I'm not really sure what this could be used for.
Maybe the looseness is a good thing?
Keep it up.
thx i guess.........
Crash...
The intro didn't really suit the rest of the song. And, I can't tell if I liked the spiffy synths and pads only because of my dislike for the intro. Honestly, all I could really focus on was the abundance of crashes throughout the intro and most of the song.
I appreciate diversity, but, after a while... it sounded like at least three different tracks, unrelated. It wasn't too bad, but very inconsistent, and too many crashes.
Keep up the good work. :)
Then my goal was reached. My goal was to make an intro, that sounded like it didn't fit in there, just because no-one does that =) Originality isn't your strong point I guess. Anyway, the intro sounds like a very cheesy intro from a random clubmix, the "verse" sounds like something ripped out of a pop-song and the "chorus" sounds like a badhairday. You've made your point clear =) Now I'm off to listen 2 your music (I aint gonne be hatefull or sometrhing, I'm just gonne be honest, word). Anyway, thanks for the review man :)
Greetz,
DJ Runaway
Where's Kylie?
I don't like how the synth pad hits before the beat, but it's a very infectious sound.
Around the middle, when that skippy synth comes in, I become sad that my other synth is gone. I don't like this new synth. Why did Mr. Bass only step in for a moment? Is he shy?
Now, it's getting frantic. This isn't as nice. Bring back the intro! Oh, no! You've abandoned your original concept altogether! I don't recognize any of these sounds now.
What exactly was this track aspiring to become?
Keep trying.
The middle transition isn't as smooth as I wanted, and frankly I usually pride myself on smooth transitions. But I barely ever put full effort into things that will be sub'd here anymore because of trolls.
The trasition is decen't, not up to my personal par, but it still works well and the song is going the way I meant it to go afterward.
Things are meant to be a lil sloppy as I introduce many of the sounds that will fill the song... then the transition comes in, sets the mood then it all comes together beautifully as I wanted. This isn't meant to be a big beat/bassy song. Rather something I thought up and was thinking of creating for a long time. Though I havent mastered the program to make my ultimate dream a reality as far as it goes for this song. This was one of my fav and most fun songs to make. After the origional concept of this song was made I found myself in love with making piano synths to carry songs. I might start making some classical/trance hybrids and see how it goes. This is just a taste of such things... this is more trance than classical obviously lol.
Thanks for taking the time to listen and review.
You should feel special...
These are the highest scores I've ever given to an audio submission!
I'm not sure what to say constructively, because it was pretty tight. Perhaps, lengthen?
Keep up the fantastic work! :)
The thing for me about length is that I suualy don't know where to go. My idea takes a sharp turn and I'd rather jsut turn it into a whole new song from the start..But yeah, I lengthen my songs in the future.
Awesome,
Jon
Experimental, yeah...
It sounds almost like a single 10 second loop as you're working on it... like we're listening to you tinker with it slightly.
What was with the sudden cut in the synth?
Maybe I'm not a fan of ambient music, if that's what this is, but I found it boring. I don't know why it has a "5".
There are some pretty cool sound effects in the background, but I definitely like them more than the music playing in the foreground. I feel like I got a present in the shape of a video game, only to find that it was Sunsoft's "Superman" instead of what I really wanted - true story. Anyway, I'm not saying there isn't potential, just saying (for me) it wasn't met.
Keep it up. :)
The sudden cut in synth was for effect before the next part starts. Sorry it was for you, but hey, no one's forcing you to listen :P
Not my cup of tea exactly...
However, when those drums first came in... WOO! I saw a slo-mo fight sequence in my mind. Crazy shit! Cute dialogue at the beginning, and the tonal change was nice.
That bass though, hm, that bass.
Keep up the good work! :)
thanks ALOT for reviewing, i appreciate it. the vocals add nothing to the song, they were jus there "cause i can"
and know that everyones speakers are different. That bass is loud on a good system (which alot of people like) and its medium on a normal sound system.
maybe you have better bass than most people, but i feel that it didnt overpower anything, and i love bass.... so....
maybe you should review something that IS your cup of tea =P
thanks for the review
Tease.
I just said in another review, "too light!" :)
You started building some energy, and it just... kept building... and building... one fuckin' tiny second at time. It was just barely keeping me satisfied.
This could be a club track. It could be a car chase. It could be a pole dance. However, it's none, not fully... because it's just a little bit too weak.
I'd love to hear a remix of this!
Keep up the great work! :)
Yea I know what you mean ,I built up but I could never find the right melody to bring it to the top. Ill try to make my next one better. thank you for your review.
-Shadoman111
Continuity missed...
The break was so smooth that it felt like an ending, and the fact that the pick-up had nothing to do with the previously heard tune, it seemed like another song had started. Not good.
Also, you had good energy at the beginning of the song, but you lacked enough variation in the beat and rhythm (could hardly hear the bass), that it sort of died, even before the break.
Don't put vocals in just because you want vocals... and don't base an entire song on one sample, especially when it's weak. If either of those is what you did - yeah, don't. If not, just realize that's sort of what it seemed like.
Keep it up. :)
HEY JPhoenix84! First of all thx for reviewing! For this song i wanted to try a somethi9ng a little different. I agree it does sound like 2 songs at some points. Another thing is that i didnt ust put vocasl in cause i wanted them, i thought they fit well and i built them around the song, i didnt just slap them on and pressed play. Anyway thx for your review!
Conflicting Tones
I liked the pace, though it didn't make me think of an aftermath. You should have kept it more mysterious, rather than odd, in my opinion. That last sound that comes in is a little out of place with what I get used to, and it changes the feeling. I don't think that's good.
You started with a good thing. Keep it up. :)
lol ok thanks for the review
Why don't you make something good?
I've listened to a bunch of your stuff now, and it, for the most part, really sucks! It's terrible.
You don't show any real talent, except for that of pasting a bunch of stolen stuff together.
Also, the samples you use and the lyrics that you "spit" are pretty offensive, and not in any funny kind of way.
It doesn't really seem like you're taking yourself seriously, so I'm gonna' quit here.
who are you anyway? I just responded to your first review. I appreciate the input and everything but wash the sand out your vagina please. Sorry if I offended you with the lyrics I spit.
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