Kindergarten
The amount of emphasis on the already unnecessary "f" word killed the whole thing as it was already dying. Is that loop taken directly from "Clint Eastwood" or am I from another reality? What's with the sound of the voice? I don't think you naturally produce that reverb. You aren't singing in time with the beat or rhythm in way too many parts.
I appreciate your review. It was very informative. I'll take everything you said into consideration. That reverb ya heard was an echo I added on. I duplicated the track and staggered them to create the echo. The loop was from clint eastwood which I turned into an instrumental. My, voice, that's just the way I rap sometimes, I like to practice versatility. Thanks for the review, even though I don't really take them seriously because I don't mess with flash, I just use fianl cut pro for movie editing. Alot of my shit is for shits and giggles. If you checked my tracks you'd see that.
What happened?
You started out with that odd sound effect, and when the guitar came in... I was happy. It's sort of infectious in its tranquility, but what the hell were you trying to do near the end?
My motto is to keep what's good. Explore, but be practical about it. I'm not sure what your intention was with this track, but most of what it did for me was confuse in a distracting kind of way.
Keep creating. :)
Ha, I was pleased with the the "sound effect" too. I agree. I was dissapointed at how the second part sounds on here. When I complete the song, I will submit a perfect Hallway Abyss. Because I love the tranquility.
On another fence.
Age 39, Male
Student
Toronto, ON, Canada
Joined on 1/13/05
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